I think it had great info but it had some opinions (a viper fish is the most unusual fish in the sea) and you didn't have a synthesis but other than that pretty good
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Hailey
11/7/2014 12:46:28 am
It was good but you didn't have a synthesis.
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Sam
11/7/2014 12:56:44 am
It was good but i did not see many capital letters